My first proposal to a girl [though I never had guts to send it to her]

I know that most of us put a considerable time in writing down the proposal for that special person in our lives. Talking about myself.. I literally spent around 3-4 days thinking about some lines that I could jot down but every time it felt as if I was being a way too cheesy and not realistic. So finally after the fourth day I wrote this...... (And plz do send me your feedback through G-mail after reading this...)

Dear X.Y.Z,

Your pulchritude is intoxicating and your voice bewitching. I am in a state of insomnia since BBV MUN. Getting straight to the point, I like you.

When you have reasons to tell why you like a person its a crush..., and when when you don't, its love. Well, the more I think about this, more I conclude that I'm in love.

Don't take me for a philanderer 'cause my feelings for you are very sincere.

I never had truck with poetry but as they say love makes you do crazy things so I wrote some lines, Check them out and do tell me what you think of it..

Words are wind,

No words can define your beauty

For it was the magic in the hands of almighty to create such a cutie

I stand here enslaved by that intoxicating smile of yours 

Dumbstruck gazing at those eyes of yours 

I'm rather an imperfect man

With nothing much to offer but promises,

The promises which I'll keep before I lie to sleep,

I promise to keep you happy, I promise to keep you free,

You might be high but you'll be higher with me [ :) ]

I promise the rest of your days will not be the same

while we play the love game........

  

So my "moon and stars" here I propose our relationship and my companionship.......

 Truly Yours

SHIVAM YADAV